Carpe Diem Tanka Shrine #6, Takuboku’s “on the white sand”
white sands
still hot on my bare feet
as the sun sets
amidst broken sand dollars
tears flow for you
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On White Sands
Ada's Poetry Alcove (2)
Poetry and Haiku – Looking to make the ordinary more than mundane.
Nicely done 🙂 Your tanka opens with a beautifully romantic scene – which makes the mood shift in the ending very poignant —
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Thanks for your kind comments.
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Very welcome 🙂
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