On White Sands On White Sands May 5, 2015 by adaspoetryalcove Carpe Diem Tanka Shrine #6, Takuboku’s “on the white sand” Picture Credit : Wiki Media white sands still hot on my bare feet as the sun sets amidst broken sand dollars tears flow for you Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading...
Nicely done 🙂 Your tanka opens with a beautifully romantic scene – which makes the mood shift in the ending very poignant — LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Nicely done 🙂 Your tanka opens with a beautifully romantic scene – which makes the mood shift in the ending very poignant —
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Thanks for your kind comments.
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Very welcome 🙂
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