Before, After, and Between Before, After, and Between September 29, 2015September 29, 2015 by adaspoetryalcove before the rains I till the dry soil beads of sweat fall ~~~ after the rains a green shoot pokes its head through the dry cracks ~~~ between my toes fresh mud squishes earth renewed for Haiku Horizons – between Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading...
the second is a classic ! the juxt between the green shoot and dry crack is so vivid and wonderful ! A masterpiece indeed ! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
this has a touch-and-feel factor….one can actually feel the process you describe here…..and the mud squishing….well it’s like icing on the cake…..:) LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
My favorite is the middle one, that is always so interesting to see. Just when you think nothing live should be at that spot. 🙂 Nature in its element! LikeLike Reply
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I just love that feeling of my feet squishing in mud!! beautiful series!
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Thanks Oliana,
I do too!
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Very nicely written
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Thank You!
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the second is a classic ! the juxt between the green shoot and dry crack is so vivid and wonderful ! A masterpiece indeed !
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Thank you Milan. Your comments are appreciated.
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this has a touch-and-feel factor….one can actually feel the process you describe here…..and the mud squishing….well it’s like icing on the cake…..:)
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So glad you enjoyed!
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Your comments are so uplifting!
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the last one was a killer…. loved it 🙂
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Glad you enjoyed!
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My favorite is the middle one, that is always so interesting to see. Just when you think nothing live should be at that spot. 🙂 Nature in its element!
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I was happy to be surprised by the mud between my toes.
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It’s a nice feeling!
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Yes. I love bare feet. 🙂
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😀
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