Daikan Daikan January 21, 2016January 21, 2016 by adaspoetryalcove Carpe Diem #900 Daikan (Great cold) this coldest day wind slips through the window piercing my soul ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Troiku the coldest day birds flock to the feeders snow keeps on falling the coldest day looking out at the snow I pull up the covers birds flock to the feeders I find my husband photographing for me snow keeps on falling we watch the bird antics and slip back to bed Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading...
Well, we haven’t gotten snow, but the temps stay way low and drop dramatically when the sun goes down. It takes all my courage to leave the house! LikeLiked by 1 person
I am so glad to hear that. I created it at the start of Carpe Diem and during the years of our existence I have seen several of our haiku kai family-members try this new creative way of writing haiku. LikeLiked by 1 person
Love your troku and the opening haiku! Cold that pierces one’s soul….
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Thanks Janice! Glad you enjoyed.
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Nicely done … and I shiver was the memory .. it was very cold here too!
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Today we’ve gotten more snow. Trying to brave the cold before the light goes.
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Well, we haven’t gotten snow, but the temps stay way low and drop dramatically when the sun goes down. It takes all my courage to leave the house!
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Good to see a troiku here … really a nice response.
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Thanks! I really like writing troiku!
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I am so glad to hear that. I created it at the start of Carpe Diem and during the years of our existence I have seen several of our haiku kai family-members try this new creative way of writing haiku.
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