Carpe Diem #900 Daikan (Great cold)
this coldest day
wind slips through the window
piercing my soul
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Troiku
the coldest day
birds flock to the feeders
snow keeps on falling
the coldest day
looking out at the snow
I pull up the covers
birds flock to the feeders
I find my husband
photographing for me
snow keeps on falling
we watch the bird antics
and slip back to bed
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Love your troku and the opening haiku! Cold that pierces one’s soul….
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Thanks Janice! Glad you enjoyed.
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Nicely done … and I shiver was the memory .. it was very cold here too!
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Today we’ve gotten more snow. Trying to brave the cold before the light goes.
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Well, we haven’t gotten snow, but the temps stay way low and drop dramatically when the sun goes down. It takes all my courage to leave the house!
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Good to see a troiku here … really a nice response.
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Thanks! I really like writing troiku!
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I am so glad to hear that. I created it at the start of Carpe Diem and during the years of our existence I have seen several of our haiku kai family-members try this new creative way of writing haiku.
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