Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 17th: “spring rain” by Ozaki Hosai (1885-1926)
spring rain:
parting on the beach
a boat and an umbrella (Ozaki Hosai)
wind makes each unstable
distant clap of thunder
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spring rain:
parting on the beach
a boat and an umbrella (Ozaki Hosai)
my love and I slip away
in opposite directions
These are excellent endings!
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