Carpe Diem Special Japanese Poetry In The Lowlands #3 Ria Giskes “six swans” (tanka)
cygnets waddle
down to the pond
plunging in
between the parents
they paddle
Carpe Diem Special Japanese Poetry In The Lowlands #3 Ria Giskes “six swans” (tanka)
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I like how you used “waddle” and “paddle”…perfection!
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