one note of the shakuhachi
resounds endlessly
piercing the winter clouds

disappearing
snow on mountain peak
unfurls a Rainbow

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4 thoughts on “Revise that Haiku – Mountain Peak”

Frank J. Tassone says:

May 3, 2018 at 9:47 am

Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #2: Ada’s latest revised haiku for Carpe Diem!

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1. adaspoetryalcove says:
  
  May 3, 2018 at 9:07 pm
  
  Thanks for the Reblog Frank.
  
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Chèvrefeuille says:

May 3, 2018 at 6:50 pm

Wow Dolores you’ ve outdone yourself … these revisions are better than the original in my opinion.

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adaspoetryalcove says:

May 3, 2018 at 9:07 pm

Thank you for your kind words, Kristjaan.

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